Date: September 19 2012 9:15 PM Title: Carbon
I was wondering if they were going to exchange names soon. It's the fourth chapter but we only just started.
Interesting, so this uses fatasy races but in a modern or near future setting?
Also I'm getting an Aperture Science vibe from this place.
Author's Response:
They exchance names at the end of the last chapter, actually. ;)
Date: September 19 2012 10:35 AM Title: Carbon
@Stubbornstain. That right there, is exactly why I hated chemistry :P Too many symbols.
Date: September 19 2012 9:44 AM Title: Carbon
As one of the reviews has already said the next chapter name could Aluminium which would make the word "critical". However, I'm willing to extrapolate.
If the name of the next chapter is Sulfer then that would make the word "Critics".
If you have another chapter called Iodine and then one called Selenium you get the word "criticise".
I'm also willing to go further. If the next chapter is Alluminium then the chapter after could be Neon and after those two chapters named Sulfer to make the word "Criticalness".
However I'm willing to go further. If the word is indeed critical (which would make for an awfully short story) then you would have a second word, like "person".
In which case, after Aluminium you have a chapter called Phosphorus then one called Erbium then one called Sulfur, after that Oxygen and ending with a chapter called Nitrogen.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2012 11:25 PM Title: Carbon
Well, so far the chapter spell out Critic. The only word that comes to mind is critical so I'm guess guessing the next chapter will be Aluminium. But then again, my knowledge on chemistry is limited :P
Really loving this story. Can't wait to see more.
Date: September 18 2012 7:49 PM Title: Carbon
Hmmmm? I don't like these people. And I love how each chapter you put in a different element. That is so creative. I comend you on doing such a great job with this story.