Date: September 17 2012 8:02 PM Title: day 2
Great story, butt I do hope that the checked "Finished" box is lying to me.
Date: September 17 2012 4:13 PM Title: The decision
Ok. I will still writing in spanish... No for your comment. Just because write in english is a problem for me
Date: September 09 2012 10:29 PM Title: The decision
Just asking but why do you have it listed under so many categories? And why the X rating. That story should be rated PG
Date: September 09 2012 6:21 AM Title: The decision
Nice story! Love the setting of the story, if u were to introduce some other characters into the story I think it would be alot more exciting story. The english is a little rough but its readable, keep up the good work. The pictures are a nice touch too.
Date: September 08 2012 11:40 PM Title: The new slave
I have to ask the same question my foreign language teacher asked once, is proper grammar the most important thing or is getting your point across? Whilst I understood everything there were spots that didn't translate the best, that having been said your English is 100 times better than my Spanish! Keep doing what you are doing and with practice you will get better at writing in English. Doing good so far!
Date: September 08 2012 11:33 AM Title: The decision
Please Comment!!!!