Date: September 29 2013 3:58 PM Title: The beginning
nice, let her carry him around in vagina or do smothing sexy. When you leave, can you please keep your account open so I can go back and reread the stories, some of them are in my favorites. Also can you finish all other stories if you haven? Sorry you are leaving, it will be a loss to this sight.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words. Dont worry, I always planned on keeping my account open to allow people to read my stories. I will definitely make sure to finish this story before I leave for good, but if you really want me to finish my "unlucky" story aswell then I will try my best. Thanks for the review.
Date: October 22 2012 12:05 AM Title: The beginning
Ohhh, I definitely wasn't expecting an unaware situation between the characters. So this whole chapter was kind of a pleasant surprise. Especially with the way you described everything at the end. Because not only did he have to suffer the humiliation of being completely overwealmed by her most casual acts of pleasure. But he's gotten himself trapped in one of the sexiest and potentially most dangerous places on her body. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
Double post..... thats happened to me several times. Annoying as hell.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2012 12:05 AM Title: The beginning
Ohhh, I definitely wasn't expecting an unaware situation between the characters. So this whole chapter was kind of a pleasant surprise. Especially with the way you described everything at the end. Because not only did he have to suffer the humiliation of being completely overwealmed by her most casual acts of pleasure. But he's gotten himself trapped in one of the sexiest and potentially most dangerous places on her body. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
I originally planned to not have any voyuer in this story, but what is a giantess story without a bit of voyuer eh? I have the next few chapters saved so hopefully the next chapter will be out soon.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2012 7:20 PM Title: The beginning
Well I'm keen to see what happens next in chapter 2.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2012 2:59 PM Title: The beginning
Not bad! Although, the dialogue and narrative need a lot more separation.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I know what you mean. It's just that I'm writing and uploading chapters on my phone because I'm in Seattle for PAX Prime :) So it's a tad hard to get it just right on the phone.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2012 11:56 PM Title: The beginning
Its a very good start to a story.
Dave
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Stay tuned, it will get better.
Date: August 29 2012 9:46 PM Title: The beginning
Interesting. Going kind of fast but I amliking the set up. Love to know more about Karen. Keep this going
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will reveal more about Karen as the story progresses ;)