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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

Adela is just one of the girls/characters who seem horrible but you just have to love them.

 

Holly may be in for the fight of her life.



Author's Response:

Yeah. I wonder what other people think of her. To me, every time she leaves the house it's like watching a huntress set out into the jungle, or something.

But personally, I like her too. Though I think she has one major flaw; she's sees love, etc., as something that's fundamentally absurd--at a basic level, she can't take things she thinks of as absurd and look at them in a serious way. This helps the story in some ways (but I won't go into that).

Also, I don't want her to fit into those sadistic/gentle or cruel/playful categories. (Most people are neither fully sadistic, gentle, cruel, or playful anyway--and I can't take writers seriously who think about their characters like that.)

Thanks for the review. I want to get this story done before November, and start something that really appeals to me.

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