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Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 15

I don't know, there is something in Adela that makes me want to doubt her actions. Since she said that everything was just a game. It's easy for someone to sacrifice some pawns  (or realize some of Martin's requests and try to befriend him) in order to achieve something greater in future. Holly and Adela don't appear to be very close, she doesn't even call her 'mother', at leat not too much from what I noticed. Martin certainly has a very strong willed mind, maybe is something both Holly and Adela desires a lot at the moment. It's so easy for most men or women to fall in temptation, with Holly/Adele's power this temptation looks so absurdly greater that is enough to make them even desire to lose humanity and live only to these carnal feelings (I can think of many people from ours giantess community). Others that don't apply to these feelings, certainly would lose their mind to fear, chaos and despair. I can think that only a very few people that would try to adapt and live this new life as best, happy and healthy as they could. I can't help but to picture Martin being a very valuable piece in their game and both of them are somehow fighting for him.



Author's Response:

I like this. Don't want to give anything away, but Adela and Holly do not have a very close relationship, and there is some considerable, unspoken from Adela's side re. what Holly did to her husband (Adela's father).

Thanks for the review, LJin.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Adela has now blossomed from misunderstood psycho to warm hearted goddess...

 

Martin is a lucky man...a potentially dangerously close to the fire...but lucky man.



Author's Response:

Agreed, in part. It's taken me fifteen chapters to show why this story is titled "Adela" and not "Holly." But I'm there.

Thanks for the review, AdamX.

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