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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

GLAD TO SEE IT BACK!

 

Was kind of hoping to learn what Adela was up to with Meri but that can be fleshed out later hopefully.

 

I await the next chapter good sir.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Ah. I may put in a retrospective--from M's POV--of that night and other events (like the field trip at the museum) during a later chapter. Could be interesting. I didn't want to snap the thread of Martin's narrative too soon, though, or give him the privilege of sharing too many of Meredith's experiences.

Anyway, Adela is coming back in the next chapter.

-scrymgeour

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