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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Escape

Finally!  What took you so long to update?  Naw, jus kidding,  Great 3rd Chapter!  Keep it going now, and please don't wait so long between ......

Can't wait to see what this "Big-Sister" has in mind,  it just keeps on getting better!

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2013 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Escape

I have a feeling this man will be spelunking sometime soon...

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Escape

Great story so far. Love the young girl that doesn't understand and what seems to be a very sadistic girl. Cannot wait to see what you have planned for her. There are so many scenarios that can play out. Cannot wait for the next update.

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