[Report This]Date: May 06 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
I like 'Big-Sister', she is the bitchy giantess that you don't take home to mother! ;`)
Great job, man!
Date: May 04 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Sister
If she smells like fish, there's something wrong...
[Report This]Date: May 04 2013 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Sister
Great new chapter. Hope he doesn't leave her. She is just great.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Escape
Finally! What took you so long to update? Naw, jus kidding, Great 3rd Chapter! Keep it going now, and please don't wait so long between ......
Can't wait to see what this "Big-Sister" has in mind, it just keeps on getting better!
Date: May 01 2013 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Escape
I have a feeling this man will be spelunking sometime soon...
[Report This]Date: April 30 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Escape
Great story so far. Love the young girl that doesn't understand and what seems to be a very sadistic girl. Cannot wait to see what you have planned for her. There are so many scenarios that can play out. Cannot wait for the next update.
Date: December 29 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
Great start although that part about tucking him in her panties was a bit on the edge. I am hoping he gets to the big sister soon so we can have things get even more interesting. Somehow I think meeting the big sister will be a case of "jumping from the frying pan into the fire" which will make it all the better.
Thanks and can't wait for Chapter 3.
Date: December 29 2012 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Child
I wonder what will happen if either of their parents finds out. I can imagine some people will be moaning about the age of the characters but if you don't have anything too sexual you should be alright.
Date: December 29 2012 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
A lovely start. Just remember to put the speech on separate lines to the description. That's all for now.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2012 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Child
Oh no, there is no way he can get out of this one.
But I can't wait for the big sister to find him.
Great story!
[Report This]Date: December 29 2012 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
Hummmm,......sounds familuer, I like! Great attention to detail! Make it a long one, and I can't wait to meet big Sis! (or Mommie for that matter!) Great start, keep going.
*wildcatman*
[Report This]Date: August 22 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
Great start. Hope to see more.
aaron
[Report This]Date: August 21 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
Really great start. Looking forward to more
Date: August 21 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
Good start so far. Keep going
Date: August 21 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
looking good so far man cant wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: August 20 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening
I like the attention to detail here!
Great Start! And hope to see more!