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Reviewer: Vandenpalmetto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2019 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm sorry to say but that was another bad ending. At first she didn't want to kill him and now after a few insults that are completely understandable you just change her personality at the tip of a hat. Peoples attitudes don't change that much and if she was actually thinking about him during their relationship one mistake wouldn't have change anything, if she was that dedicated she would have called the other girl and told her to fuck off instead of killing her boyfriend.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

This was a pretty good read. I always liked the idea of vengeful girlfirend and this turned out pretty well. The only real gripe I have was that the humilulation he went through wasn't described in a bit greater detail. 

However, i still enjoyed the read. Looking forward to your next tale. 

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

wow amazing ending. I honestly cant think of better ending

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