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Reviewer: Kendra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2013 4:09 PM Title: Deleted

OMG!! Deelann I just finished this story and I loved it. I can't wait to read the rest of them. It was like you were writing from my personal fantasy :)

Author's Response:

I'm so sorry for the late response.  This is the very first story I wrote and posted and has been...well...forsaken.  It is truely rare that an author can write about another person's fantasy without a challenge request.  I am honored.  I hope you like my other works and find my style similar to your tastes.

Thank you Kendra for the generous review.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2013 8:46 PM Title: Deleted

Another good story. I decided to take tonight to just read through all your stories, While each one has a similar plot line (feet play, mouth play, then sex) you make them all unique. I enjoy this about you and hope you continue writing.

I think you would do good with a long story though, you should attempt it someday.



Author's Response:

You're in luck Dudemanguy!  I have a long story posted called Displaced Anger.  I tried to create a different type of ending for it so I wouldn't be predictable as an author.  According to the readers, I failed and they demand a different ending.  I plan on revisiting this story an adding more to it someday but as of now I have a few more prewritten stories yet to be posted.  I also have plots and outlines for other stories that must be written.  Since your taste is different than mine, you might find the ending appealing.  Check it out and let me know please.

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