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Reviewer: Unknownguy2088 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2017 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Dear author, this is my first time writing a review and I have a suggestion, can you add more interaction between Ben and Kimberly and a bit of interaction between Kimberly and Ellis? And perhaps that's where Ben will somehow land on a part of Ellis's body? By the way I like your story and keep up the good work!😊

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

We need chapter 2!!!

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

This needs a 2nd chapter so much it's not even funny anymore

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

This needs a 2nd chapter so much it's not even funny anymore

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love the first chapter, I hope you will release the second very soon.

Reviewer: Raiza Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great unaware!  Please continue!

Reviewer: jxdkn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2012 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think the story is great and you should continue.

Reviewer: putmeinyourpocket Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

You are aware that would mean the mom had Ellis when she was 13, right?

Other than that, a good story. Just, think about your age gaps first.

Reviewer: Hollow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

An amazing story, and this is just chapter one, i'm already hooked, please more!

-Jake

Reviewer: kol868 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yes yes and yes keep it up man

Reviewer: UserDoesNotExist Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well, quite frankly, that was incredible.

I know it's not your fancy, but I would love to see you handle foot interaction.

I like insertion too, and this takes the cake for some of the best I've ever read.

Reviewer: Brandon1122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please, please, continue!

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

wonderful story. Cant wait to see the next part or story

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

 

'thank you angel in jeans' ever heard that joke lol

Reviewer: South Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome. Very detailed and I love the two points of view. Please, please continue.

Reviewer: Dezembek Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ive enjoyed your story so far. I'm enjoying the unaware element very much, been a while sense we saw a story with such potental. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Cheezo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue. This is the first good story I've seen in a while so keep it up!

Reviewer: mrwhite705 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

the incest is handled capably within the context to entertain a broader audience, not overt as the tag would suggest but cirmcumstantial, cant wait to see it develope further! 

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