Date: September 10 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
I know you'll probably never see this, and it seems like you don't usually respond to reviews anyway so I'll certainly never know if you saw this, but I just have to say that I really loved this story......until the ending. Firstly, from a fetishistic standpoint, I found it to be a massive turn-off when Gloria was suddenly the one being tortured (and partially by a male giant, no less, without the Giant tag or size roles to warn of this- IMO the Couples tag really wasn't enough of a warning by itself), and from a plot standpoint, it just didn't seem to fit with the rest of the story. Yes, in theory it would be cathartic to watch her go through all that, but with this being more of a fetishistic story where some people might 'like' Gloria, for lack of a better word (what I mean is, with this being a violent giantess story, a lot of readers want the giantess to remain dominant and aren't really interested in seeing her receive comeuppance), as opposed to more of a plot-based tale where most people would actually root against the villain, that just didn't really mesh well with the rest of the story: to me, it seemed like a failed attempt to shoehorn in a happy ending just for the sake of having one, when it felt like one simply didn't belong there. Now, I'm not saying that having a happy ending in a violent giantess story is necessarily a bad thing, but in this case I don't think one should have happened-at least, not at that point in the story. On top of that, the execution just felt off, with several important plot elements appearing suddenly and making little sense (1. It's a little too convenient that Gloria's power just happens to come from such an easily accessible source, 2. There was really no reason for Gloria to spare Sarah, and plenty of reasons NOT to, and 3. If all it took to shrink people was a spell, Gloria could've easily shrunken both the protagonists even when she herself was tiny, especially when it's shown that she doesn't actually need the book itself to do so). I know that I'm asking for a lot from a fetish writer as far as "plot holes" and that goes, while simultaneously essentially saying that fetish stories don't always need a ton of plot, but this just bothered me to the point where I felt the need to say something about it.
I don't want to leave a star rating, as 1. A decent amount of my disapproval of the ending stems from my personal tastes (which I can't really judge you or anyone else on), and 2. I don't want to taint the story's image for new readers, but I'd give it about 7/10 overall........which, again, really sucks to say when I enjoyed most of it so much.
Author's Response:
Well thanks for leaving a review. I know not everyone likes happy endings and not everyone likes bad endings. I wanted to mix it up a little since I did a couple of 'bad ending' stories before hand. I'm glade you liked the story up till the end.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
I know I've reviewed the ending before but... once again I have to say that this was one of my first tastes as to how a true masterpiece of gts fiction is written. The vore is of of the hard (chewing) variety and being primarily a soft vore guy that sits a little rough with me in most stories, but your writing style, quality of fetish content, and your innate ability to actually have us become invested in your characters instead of them becoming blank stand-ins for our own fantasy made me wait with bated breath for every new chapter, and the ending (no spoilersw for those reading the review who haven't read) was probably the most amazing ending ever to a story on this site, as it didn't simply consist of a glorified version of the other size interactions in the story but was very much a "Whoa. Didn't see that coming." (Five minutes later.)"That was the most epic ending EVER!
Date: August 11 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
The girl is way, way, way too young. I can't be the only one a little disturbed by a 10 year old featured in what is essentially pornography.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
All I'm going to say is HELL YES! This was the perfect way to end this story, the revenge being so complete, and I'm so glad you brought Sarah back this was a healthily suprising ending. Brilliant ending payoff, I had personally hoped it would end with Sarah and Mike together doing something like this from the start I love your work, I am having anticipation vore about when your next story is coming! .And as thanks for you mentioning the hunger games reference earlier I want to say this. If you want to continue with thid story, have Sarah be occasionally using the spell behind Mike's back and he finds out. You choose how it plays out. But if you do pick it, I volunteer as tribute! :)
Date: August 10 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it, great story. I definitely encourage you to continue!
Date: August 10 2012 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
hoping that you start the story up again with new characters. it's not all that common that someone as young as gloria (in the beginning) is a predator. they usually end up as prey. as such, i would probaby like to see a new pred around her age.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the Hunger Games comment lol, so true. Even when you win u still would rather be dead than survive for more torture
Date: August 06 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is a fairly underwritten genre (in the pred itself). captures the cruelty i look for in preds. my personal favorite is the anal vore scene (short as it is), but that's just my personal preference. well written and frequently added to.
Date: July 14 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like where this is going! Gloria is awesome lol
[Report This]Date: July 11 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
A very good start to the story.
Dave