Reviews For Party Time
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Reviewer: Small Pet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2023 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey Kickyou, I loved your story! Mostly the scat parts!! I'd love to be pooped by the three girls too, or eaten, I can't even decide lol!

Thanks for this great piece!

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 20 2023 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good story KY. Would you mind if I did a rewrite of it (alternate ending, some slight changes, some additional storyline)?

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see what happens to him.  Love your stories hope you keep making more!  Just one suggestion let him live, have her do somthing horrible and he survives and she finds out its really him or thinks hes just a toy or somthing.   You don't need to kill all them off all the time, somtimes leaving them survive makes it more excitinbg for your readers because they can imagine what will happen to him after!  Will this be the rest of his life, how long will he survive, will he return to normal?

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