Reviews For Retreat
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

I can already tell this is going to be good. ;-D

Reviewer: XxDoopexX Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

Your doing a great Job, I wouldn't mind you taking time to develop Alice's character more. If I were writting the story I would make Davids shrinking slow and subtle changes from the looks of thinks he isn't having any trouble staying where he is.  This is looking to be one of my favorite stories so far keep it up.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

This story is fantastic. Can't wait to see where you take it from here. I absolutely love these characters.

aaron

Reviewer: dycemist Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

Another great chapter! It has nice development, and you're doing a great job of secluding the characters. I'm looking forward to the next one.

And one other thing, you update very quickly! Some authors take days for short chapters, but you get new ones up in hours! Good on you. 

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

You are doing wonderful :)))

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