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Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

great 3rd chapter. Im personally hoping he gets put in the food and fed to his own gf

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

a few spelling mistakes aside a pretty good read  but not exactly my cup of tea. a bit more description would go a long way.

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