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Date: June 25 2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 10: CHANGES FOR TWO

I always thought a dream was a wish your heart made. ;-D

Author's Response:

If only Walt had applied his team's beautiful 1940s-50s art style to animating giantess vore stories.

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Date: June 25 2012 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 9: IN LOVE WITH HIS TEACHER

Hmmmmm! I suspect another bit of time travel.

Author's Response:

Not this TIME (Pardon the pun)

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Date: June 23 2012 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 8: RESCUE BY REMOTE CONTROL

Much better! :-)

Author's Response:

Didn't want to spoil the surprise of his ingenious escape, but expected you'd like it. The story has more surprises in the chapters to come.

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Date: June 23 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 7: ILONA

So, the attempt to hold him captive was extreme hide-and-seek? A little unsettling, given the recent guilty verdict, up here, in the "People v. Coach Sandusky" case.

Author's Response:

Well let's just say Percy Dale caught a child version of Stockholm Syndrome. But don't worry. This plot doesn't go beyond the next chapter. I'm about to post chapter 9 to...

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Date: June 22 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 6: TIME OF THE KNIGHT

So far; so good. You're capturing pre-adolescent attitudes and emotions almost with the clean-cutness (?) of a b/w 1960's sit-com!

Author's Response:

Well that'll change when he hits adolesence around chapter 13, and wait 'til you meet the giantess!

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Date: June 22 2012 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 5: SUMMERS AND WINTERS

When I was a kid, the last hider found became "It," while the finder got to become one of the hiders. Oh, well!

"Different folks/different strokes, and all that jazz" (as Ray Venn would say).

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're into this story. It's more like one of yours actually, lots of adventure, period style, with a gts subplot thrown in. I'll have to check the lurker count in a minute. Haven't thought of it until now.

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Date: June 22 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 4; GENTLE JENNY

"...remotely aking to boys...except given...to giggling for no apparent reason."

I LOVE THAT DEFINITION! X-D

Author's Response:

I think i menat to write "akin", not "aking".

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Date: June 21 2012 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 3: NIGHT OF THE WANDERERS

So, this is going to be like "Spy Kid vs. Lord Voldemort?" Intriguing concept!

Author's Response:

Most of his spy/crime/thriller stuff will be in his early 20s, but the giantess vore will start in his mid teens.

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Date: June 21 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 2: SWEET CAKE DREAMS

He's dreaming that his ex-math teacher is a man-shrinking witch?

Author's Response:

Not exactly ... well not at all actually. I really had this horrific occultic nightmare (and the solution that came from prayers I doubted would work) at that age and worked it into the story.

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Date: June 21 2012 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: THE YOUNGEST HERO

Good start! Although, I don't remember anyone pen-named "Percy" or "Newkin."

Author's Response:

No. They're taken from my childhood memories and wishes and dreams.

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