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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2012 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 44: COLIN SHOWS HIS GIFT

That last quatrain reminds me of my favorite anti-smoking jingle.

"It's not the cough that carries you off."

"It's the coffin they carry you off in."

*An old rhyme based on the (quite apt) American slang-term for cigarettes: coffin-nails.*

Author's Response:

love it! LOL

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