Date: April 11 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution
Okay, two questions:
1) Why doesn't Lucy wear any clothes?
2) What do the characters look like?
*great story, by the way!
Author's Response:
The descriptions in this story were intentionally left as essentially 'blank canvasses' so the reader could apply their own ideals to the characters as they read it :) It was an experiment i tried out as i sometimes felt that when you have too much description for too many characters it just becomes a confusion of mental images...
The experiment seems to have failed given the feedback i've had from people on the lack of description being a negative point to the story, so its not something i will be repeating.
Lucy doesn't wear clothes because she is a pet. As the story points towards from the get-go, she is considered sub-human and giving her clothes would be considered rediculous like dressing a hamster or a mouse.
hope this goes some way towards explaining for you, and i'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the story ^_^ Thanks for dropping me a note.
[Report This]Date: October 13 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution
Oops, sorry Em, I always forget to rate! Thanks again for the great story :)
Author's Response:
hehe thats ok :) Thanks for sticking with me despite all my unplanned hiatuses!
[Report This]Date: October 13 2012 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution
This was a great read i enjoyed this story from start to finish. I was just re-reading your first chapter just the other day so i was quite overjoyed to see this posted in its entirety.
This was written beautifully and had a unique story. I hope to read more stories for you.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the comment/rating, glad you enjoyed the read! I think this has been my favourite story to date, definately fanned my desire to do more :)
Date: October 12 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution
I'm stunned! A story by you that the villainess doesn't win :P Never saw that coming but to tell you the truth, I actually felt bad for Lucy so I'm glad she didn't get smooshed. Of course the wretch I am, I was thoroughly enjoying the scene while Emma was crushing the cage *sheepishly looks at the floor*.
Loved the ping pong scene too, and the scene where Lucy set up Emma, funny :) Awesome story! Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response:
hahaha :P I was very deliberate in my attempts to throw off the norm for this one. I wanted to keep people guessing.
The scene of emma stomping the cage was the -entire- basis of this story. It started out as just that idea that i worked around so i'm glad you enjoyed it as much as i did ;)
[Report This]Date: October 12 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 3 - For Every Problem, A Solution
WTF it ended good for Lucy! Im shocked lol I knew someone had to get crushed. Im glad to see a somewhat gentle side to the stories end. glad u finished the story. I love all your stories and cant wait for the next one.:) Damn your good
Author's Response:
hehe thanks very much for the reviews :) i have a number of stories in the works so i wont be gone as long as i was last time. Thanks for the compliments!