Date: October 09 2013 9:11 PM Title: A New Delivery Method
A thorughly exciting story! Can't wait to see where it goes. Just joined to give you a bit of encouragement to finish it.
Cheers!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you like it enough to sign up for it :). It'll be at least a few more days before I post the next chapter, fyi. Maybe up to a week.
Date: October 06 2013 2:02 AM Title: A New Delivery Method
How many chapters are there before the end of the story?
And without giving too much away, would you say that the end of the story will not be a happy one, with Nick dead or so small that he will not have much of a life and with his family being sad for the lost of their son.
I dislike an ending where it ends bad for Nick and for Michelle to get away with what she did and she goes on to live a good life being tall and beautiful. His family is going to want their son back and to have Michelle pay for what she did.
In true i feel like the story just being drawn out now, to see how much suffering and tourcher Nick can be put through. Each chapter is of him suffering in someway with Michelle not looking like she really cares what happens to him or thinking with what his family will do once they find out.
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I just want you to know am trying not to sounding too harsh on what i say and seem like am putting you or your story down.
I just want to tell you how i feel on this story. After some point in the story it just started giving me a bad feeling to what was happening, but i want to see how it ends and thats way am still reading it even if am not liking what is going on.
Author's Response:
It's close to the end now. I don't want to even say if it'll be happy or sad at this point because that'll give too much away. Sorry you haven't enjoyed all the suffering and torture -- that's the part I enjoy the most. But anyways, the story will wrap up pretty soon.
Date: October 05 2013 11:42 PM Title: A New Delivery Method
This being a story of substantial size, I unfortunately haven't been around the site often enough to keep up, but the segments I've read, including this new one, were very well done. You've clearly put a lot of effort into making something with a lot of depth here. It's rare to see slow-shrink macro stories that actually have the restraint to tell a true slow-shrinking/growing story (or in your case, both) over time to really get into the heads of the characters and deliver a solid sense of pathos. Plus, the interactions between your characters are quite sexy at times. Well done.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I figured you had lost interests but glad that's not the case. Yep, this story's a long one alright, just realized it's on the top-ten longest stories list now :O. Yeah, this story was quite an undertaking, with a lot of time put into it including rewrites and things like that. It was exhausting, but fun. And I'm glad to see it paid off.
Date: October 05 2013 10:54 PM Title: A New Delivery Method
I liked the idea of this story ending with Nick going back to his tall self and Michelle going back to her short nerdy self but instead of going back to being mean to her Nick would end up dating her anyway much to the surprise of his friends due to learning the error of his ways. Obviously you didn't choose that path. Anyway it's been a nice read. Hoping Michelle sees justice for her behavior but that's just how I feel.
Author's Response:
Errr ... sorry, it's taking me a few read-throughs to parse that first sentence there. It's a doozy, lol, and I'm up too late as it is :P
Yeah, I don't think I'm spoiling much at this point in saying it's too late now to completely reverse everything (height-wise) and return to normalcy given their current emotional states and the irreversible damage that's been done -- which I could understand possibly being partly reversed had the 'regrowth' potion worked, but even still I feel like the domination she put him through was too intense to simply undo in that fashion (in my opinion anyway) (plus, too, I enjoy darker stories anyway).
How's THAT for a long sentence, lol.