[Report This]Date: August 28 2013 8:50 AM Title: The Intruder
I really hope hegets whats coming to him. I just read the entire thin and I still feel he will try to take advantage of her if he finds out. I hope she uses him to get off anf that more violence is on the way. He deserves it.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it. A lot of people have told me they feel bad for Nick and want things to turn around for him ... glad not everyone feels that way though.
Date: August 25 2013 9:16 AM Title: The Intruder
I LOVE how manipulative Michelle is getting at this point, can't wait to hear what happens next :D
Author's Response:
Next chapter's a doozy ...
Date: August 25 2013 1:19 AM Title: The Intruder
At this point poor Nick has been reduce to nothing more than a little kid with a mind that is about the same. Michelle is really no better than Nick was when he was before all this.
She may be a little wrost now that she is toying with basically a little kid.
I don't see the enjoyment in seeing anyone getting manipulated and tormented like this, some revenge is nice hear and there but that has been long gone by now.
This is not my type of story, i dislike seeing what is going on and feel bad for Nick each time i read it.
I read it because am seeing how will this play out and read it long enough to not stop reading it. Am hoping to see a good out come for Nick by the end of it.
Author's Response:
Well, of COURSE an angel of life would say that ... lol, just kidding. But for me it's all about the manipulation and torment, but I know it's not for everyone.
Date: August 25 2013 12:27 AM Title: The Intruder
Things ever gonna change for Nick? Michelle at this point is no better then Nick was in the beginning.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I agree, Michelle is not exactly a 'good person', but maybe she was never supposed to be, or maybe she was corrupted by power, eh? As I told the last reviewer, for me it's not really about 'getting even' with him anymore, we're well past that.