Date: July 19 2013 12:14 AM Title: Back Home
Am starting to feel sorry for Nick, Michelle is playing him, she is putting on an act being all sweet and nice to him making him thinking he is incharge when he in truth is not. Its all part of her plan.
Am starting to not like seeing Nick so easy manipulated by her. Yes he was a dick and asshole when he was normal but he has gone through more than enough now for some stupid experiment.
He has been gone for a week or so, his family has to be worried about him. Its time for the experiment to end, Michelle has made her point enough.
Am just feeling bad for Nick now.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm sorry to hear that. Personally, I love seeing male characters get manipulated and tormented like this, but I know it might not be for everyone.
On a practical note, I didn't do a good job of making this clear but I wrote in a part where Nick's parents go off on a cruise during this week in the story, the idea being that they don't know about what's happening to Nick back home. (I went back and added this and a couple other things to the early chapters about a month or two ago, but it might have flown under people's radar ... sorry if that's the case for anyone)