[Report This]Date: September 01 2012 9:03 PM Title: The Lab Partner
This is the best story on the entire freaking site and I await every single new chapter. This is great so far! I'm very interested to see just how tall Michelle ends up growing... she seems to just never stop now.
I would like Nick to eventually reach a very small height...you know, down to inches. The fear effect is fantastic.
Overall though I love this, and will be following it to the end! Hope it updates more often, but I'd rather it kept up with quality over quantity :)
Author's Response:
Many thanks, cordell. It's great to hear feedback like that.
I will say that I'm planning to focus on the few-feet-tall range for Nick. That's what I tend to prefer. But I certainly won't rule out the possibility of dabbling in the inches range towards the end.
Also, I've been writing frequently since returning from vacation, but I might hold off on posting chapters for a while until it's closer to completion and I'm sure I have it how I want it. The 'quantity' will be plenty, though. Hope the quality ends up good too :)
[Report This]Date: August 19 2012 5:28 PM Title: The Lab Partner
Any New Chapters coming soon???
Author's Response:
I'm in the process of writing them. I'd like to hold off on posting the next chapter for a little while because I might change something. Shouldn't be too too long, though. Thanks for keeping interested :)
[Report This]Date: June 10 2012 2:24 PM Title: The Lab Partner
WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER????!!! :-)
Author's Response:
Working on it as we speak! Should be out fairly soon ... glad you're taking such an interest :)
[Report This]Date: May 31 2012 8:00 AM Title: The Lab Partner
You really have something great going on here, I especially like the role reversal here of how Michelle has taken Nick's school role, and how Nick is in Michelle's place now as an outcast.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you enjoy how there relationship begins to evolve in Chapter 5.
[Report This]Date: May 26 2012 4:49 PM Title: The Lab Partner
Another great episode. Keep it up.
Date: May 24 2012 10:51 AM Title: The Lab Partner
Loving it so far.
I cant wait to see what Nick's social status will be like when he goes back to school, and the meeting with his girlfriend.
Author's Response:
Thanks, DarcKage. I promise, he'll be returning to school soon, in chapter 4. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2012 8:59 AM Title: The Lab Partner
Please continue.
The quality of your writing and plot development are among the best.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Don't worry, I will be posting plenty more, as time allows.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2012 4:34 PM Title: The Lab Partner
So far, excellent writing, characters, and everything else. This story is a real pleasure to read, and I am very excited to see where it goes from here. I can't wait for the next chapters, I hope you can get them out as soon as possible.
Keep up the great work, you truly are a great writer.
Author's Response:
Wow, many thanks! I've greatly enjoyed writing it so far but I hesitated to post it online since I wasn't sure if others would enjoy it as much. Hopefully you continue to enjoy the story as it progresses.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2012 10:36 PM Title: The Lab Partner
quality stuff, i like the effort you put into having just enough backstory to develop the characters while still keeping things moving. your dialogue flows very well, also, and helps maintain the illusion
Author's Response:
That's high praise from the legendary jack smith! I always find myself getting drawn into stories more when they have a solid backstory, and hopefully mine is decent enough to keep things interesting. Thanks again.
Date: May 16 2012 12:57 PM Title: The Lab Partner
Great story so far, can't wait for more!!!
Date: May 15 2012 4:42 AM Title: The Lab Partner
Very good start! I like the potential endless teasing! :) Curious to know how Nick will be forced to take the red substance now - maybe the strongest version will shrink him down by stage...? Maybe other guys will have to taste this substance... cannnot wait!!