[Report This]Date: December 11 2013 5:06 PM Title: The Lab Partner
I hope you get a chance to post the first draft soon. I'm really looking forward to it.
Date: November 15 2013 7:44 AM Title: The Lab Partner
When do you think you will post the first draft ?
Author's Response:
I'm really busy at the moment, but probably fairly soon.
[Report This]Date: October 15 2013 10:49 PM Title: The Lab Partner
Despite being pretty much a foot domination fan regarding this genre, your writing talent won me over and I am extremely grateful you took such care and time to produce such a great story. So many stories on sites that cater to this fetish come across as incoherrant that it was a breath of fresh air to read something so well-written. My only wish would be that in future stories, you include some forced foot-smelling and stuff. :) If you go with the family angle next, I definitely want to see foot stuff. But, given that you're the author, whatever you put out will no doubt be fantastic.
Author's Response:
Never thought I'd read 'breath of fresh air' and 'forced foot-smelling' in the same review, hahaha.
But seriously, thanks for the kind compliments. I'll just be up front with you, though -- foot stuff just isn't my thing. The most you'll ever see from me is some very brief foot worship and/or footplay in the future (as you saw once or twice in Pariah), but no more than that, sorry.
[Report This]Date: October 15 2013 10:43 PM Title: The Lab Partner
If you do a story like this in a bro/sis scenario... to me, it could already be a nominee for one of my favorite stories on this site, also I actually for one I guess liked the ending.
Author's Response:
I do enjoy brother-sister scenarios (sibling rivalry, role reversal, etc.). Admittedly, though, my real passion is father-daughter scenarios, and you'll definitely see that from me in the future. But I'd say there's a good chance of brother/sister stuff along the way too.
[Report This]Date: October 15 2013 4:34 PM Title: The Lab Partner
An amazing story with masterful detail in Nick's slow degradation and demise. I do love the maniacal giantess on a mission to create a new world, I am a bit surprised to see that character change out of Michelle. I do like how you consciously made her aware of how she was becoming just as warped as Nick was in his dilemma. It was also masterful how Nick for him being as big a jackass as he was to become sympathetic, and vice-versa for Michelle.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I consciously kept from really revealing what her larger plans were until the very end (maybe gave some vague hints earlier on, but nothing more), really so I could focus on Nick and Michelle here and leave this 'revelation' as a change of focus and promise of future things at the end. Anyways, hopefully this didn't seem too surprising/shocking to see this out of Michelle in terms of it feeling out of place with her character. Hope not, anyway. Mostly, I intended it to seem like she wasn't planning this all along, but in later chapters as her psychological changes took hold she started to develop these radical new-world thoughts. And to a large extent, by the end, it's supposed to almost feel tragic, like she can't help herself and is almost 'fated' to carry out this goal (like I described in my comment below).
Anyway, thanks for the glowing comments, and I'm glad you enjoyed the ending (I knew there must be someone out there who would ... :P)
[Report This]Date: October 03 2013 7:42 AM Title: The Lab Partner
I hope this is the author trying to keep us guessing, but I get a feeling that things aren't going to end with Nick living a long and happy life. Plus Michelle spilling the beans herself confuses me a bit. I can't tell if she's trying to punish herself for what she did or she thinks she can get away with it in the end. A thought I had for restoring some of Nick's functionality, would be to shrink him further, but instead of the mass going to Michelle, it converts to muscle mass and brain capacity. He's be smaller and brainwashed, but at least he'd be a decent companion for Michelle.
Still a good story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Interesting thoughts. I won't say anything else for now to keep from spoiling things, though. Thanks for reading.
Date: September 05 2013 9:14 AM Title: The Lab Partner
Great story, but I can't catch Michelle personality: evil, gentle or just a psycho.
Author's Response:
That's pretty much what I intended, yes.
Well, originally in my head Michelle was just pure evil, but in later drafts things became a little more interesting/muddy. I like it better that way, I think.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2013 4:55 AM Title: The Lab Partner
I can't tell what the hell she wants anymore. In a way she's been fooling the readers as much as him (though we always wondered). I'm curious as to what she's training him for. Is it the typical shrunken sex slave, or is she trying to build the perfect man from scratch? That is, rebuild his mind to her preference, and slowly grow him back, maybe even giving him some intelligence. She did have a crush on him before. Maybe she still hopes to have something with him. Again, I'm praying they'll be no "evil" ending. But the story is very good and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, stay tuned ...
Date: August 25 2013 1:24 PM Title: The Lab Partner
Can't wait for the part where he realises what's happening to him (if he does realise).
Author's Response:
Indeed.
Date: August 24 2013 7:59 PM Title: The Lab Partner
I've enjoyed this story on the whole, especially Michelle's back-and-forth displays of cruelty and care for Nick (even though most or all of it is pretty much just an act). I'm kind of wondering how much Michelle is gonna shrink Nick by the story's end.
I'm also hoping Nick doesn't meet a completely tragic ending (especially one where he stays in his shrunken state for the rest of his life). I'd like to think he'd gain a little humility and tell Michelle he's genuinely sorry for how he acted before the experiment. Either that or he has some kind of epiphany and just tells Michelle he knows that she's just playing him by this point. Personally, I think Michelle is going a tad overboard with getting vengeance on Nick the more she shrinks him (especially given his mental/emotional state), but that's just an outsider's view on the story. Don't let my view on things rattle how you go about the plot.
Regardless of how things end, it's been a thoroughly intriguing read on the whole. Probably one of the best I've read on this site in months. Looking forward to more soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
The way I see it, by this point in the story it's less about Michelle exacting revenge on him and more about Michelle 'experimenting' on him and seeing what she can do to his mind as well as body.
As for the ending, it's a ways off still but you might find it interesting how it plays out (I hope!).
Date: August 15 2013 3:50 PM Title: The Lab Partner
You should have Michelle wear a dirndl.
Author's Response:
Meh, that doesn't really do anything for me in particular. But that's the power of story -- you can imagine her wearing anything you want, right?
Date: August 11 2013 12:09 PM Title: The Lab Partner
If you upload another chapter today you will be so awesome.
Date: July 28 2013 6:19 AM Title: The Lab Partner
New chapter today :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's the plan anyway, if I finish in time ... how did you know? lol, do I always release chapters on the weekends? I hadn't realized.
Date: July 22 2013 5:00 AM Title: The Lab Partner
Story continues to be awesome . Not that you need the help, but I think it would be cool if some of the other girls that have picked on nick got there hands on the formula and uses some of his old guy friends to grow too .....maybe Cindy making a comeback much larger ....or even Nicky having a kid sister Mayne around 13 to 15
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I'll just tell you, though, that I generally prefer to fixate on just a couple main characters. In this story, everything I've written is geared towards developing Nick and Michelle's relationship over time, and it just wouldn't fit in my thought process to switch to other storylines with other characters. I'd rather make it a whole separate story instead.
Oh, but kid sister, you say? Yes, I'll definitely be writing stories with that theme in the future, you have my word :)
Date: July 19 2013 6:50 AM Title: The Lab Partner
He hasn't even seen those tig ol' bitties yet. It's not time for it to end.
Author's Response:
Right :)
[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 8:58 AM Title: The Lab Partner
This story has been nothing short of incredible. I'm really pulling for Nick but I have a bad feeling about his near future.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Some people have told me they're rooting for him, and some wanting to see him fall. It's interesting to hear both sides :)
[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 8:51 AM Title: The Lab Partner
Was just wondering, are we far off the halfway point, or are we past that?
Author's Response:
Not halfway yet.
So, you know, it'll probably be several more decades until it's all posted ... jk :P
Date: July 06 2013 2:49 PM Title: The Lab Partner
Will anyone else use the formula
Author's Response:
I'd rather not say at this point, to avoid giving things away in later scenes ...
[Report This]Date: July 01 2013 6:19 PM Title: The Lab Partner
Love this story, man. Especially that you never seem to fall into one place of comfort; the plot constantly is changing and it works. Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's hard to do with such a long story, so I'm glad things still feel fresh.
Date: June 30 2013 6:50 PM Title: The Lab Partner
So, so good.
Even though I had my doubts with the change in direction, the last two chapters have really sold things to me. I can't wait to see what is to come.
Author's Response:
Thanks :). Things will really start heating up next chapter.