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Reviewer: Uhpoop Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 4: Second Experience Continued

Brandi is an asshole

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 4: Second Experience Continued

Wow, it's like Brandi completely forgot they exist. It doesn't get more humiliating than that.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 4: Second Experience Continued

Know that the reason I said a size bigger than "micro" in my last review was that given the kind of story you're trying to right, a bigger size would be more believable. Micro is better for unaware stories, or those that involve crushing. Meaningful interation is better at a larger size. Though I am enjoying your story so I shouldn't complain too much.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 4: Second Experience Continued

I sure hope there's a chapter five! This is too good to leave it permanently like this.

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