[Report This]Date: November 07 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Wow, can't believe I never left a review for this one. Easily one of my favorites, on this site. Love the concept, love the size range, and I love the interaction. Awesome job.
Date: August 15 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
didnt started to read yet..for some reason the textsize increase/decrease feature doesnt work at this story. Did you write the story text in the comment field or such?
[Report This]Date: July 27 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Wonderful story, disappointing ending. I HAte feet yet even though thats the main focus it's a great story. I wish it could of been expanded to other categories. I loved the whole security system, I wish she would of mistoke him for a theif. The ending was rather disappointing could of been expanded on. Would be nice to see whats going to happen to him now.
Date: July 27 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Ypu can't fathom how excited I was to see this story updated again after a year or so. Sad to see it end, but I am happy that you returned to it, and I look forward to anything you may write in the future!
Date: May 23 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Yes please continue this story, I really like this one
I'm hoping you make Brandi pay the price, maybe make her fuck Jen's nipple
lol
Keep up the good work
Date: May 22 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
This is one of my favorite stories going on atm, really do hope you plan to continue it.
Date: May 08 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
It's been a while since the last update. Well maybe just a week... I'm not impatient, just looking forward to more.
I've been fearing that you may have written yourself into a corner with chapter 5. After chapter 4 I envisioned the story going in a different direction than I can see chapter 5 taking it. I thought the characters would be left alone until Brandi returned, and with her working at a bar I imagined she would be in a good position to lure "victims" into Jennifer's appartment after work and shrinking them, routinely expanding the collection of tiny people at her mercy.
Haha, anyways, I've been enjoying this story and I look forward to seeing where it leads to.
Author's Response:
Sorry :( Work got in the way of my writing. I still have the story planned in my head. Just need the time.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
I really enjoy this story, please continue
I'm really looking forward to seeing what Jennifer might do to her friend Brandi when she's back to normal, makes for one nail biter of a story.
:)
[Report This]Date: April 26 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Loving the regular updates, and I certainly didn't see the story heading where it has. Twists galore! Keep it up, I like your work.
Date: April 24 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Awesome, please post some more soon!
Date: April 24 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Awesome, please post some more soon!
Date: April 23 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Great beginning:D Maybe if he wasnt so small after a few shrinkings. A more managable size like 2-3 inches.
Date: April 23 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Wow! Great beginning, loving the size difference :)
[Report This]Date: April 23 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Very interesting idea. It'd be interesting if she could reset the device to shrink people to 2 inches tall or so.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Experience
Wow, really excellent start! I love our hero's irresistible urge to shrink himself. Jennifer has all the making of a great giantess.
Hope you continue. Also curious about this girl/girl tag the story has.
Author's Response:
New chapter added...