Reviews For THE THIN LINE
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Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 27

Too tried to really comment. But I'm glad you found the time to work on this story.



Author's Response: You are mots welcome.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 27

Some thin Red Indians? A good natured archery match. sounds great. so long as I don't have to stand with an apple on my head.



Author's Response: Only William can tell (lol). P.S.---How did Oishi feel about being used as a ninja in that earlier chapter?

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