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Reviewer: oishi1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2013 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

see a lot of recognizable faces in the first chapter (if two is a lot)

 

Yeah, orphans were hanged for theft if they lived on the streets. The trains were a way to find a home.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oops! That should've read "Hitler" and "Depression-era." Sorry about that, Tim!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh yes, I remember Allen Jenkins' character shouting "You can't prove corpus deliciious!" to a cop I think, in a b/w Falcon movie which Raymond Chandler adapted from his novel "Farewell my Lovely."



Author's Response: "Whoa, dude! Deja vu."

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh yes, I remember Allen Jenkins' character shouting "You can't prove corpus deliciious!" to a cop I think, in a b/w Falcon movie which Raymond Chandler adapted from his novel "Farewell my Lovely."



Author's Response: "By George, I think you've got it!"

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

A very interesting read, I must say.  You definitely have a knack for convincing settings, with everything down to the vocabulary in perfect place.  I admire your ability to write such story-driven giantess tales as you do rather than merely focusing on the fetish material as it is in so many of the stories on this site.



Author's Response: Thank you, Mr. Smith! :-D It's always nice to hear from a new reviewer. As to the more usual fetish material? I experimented with depicting a graphic sex scene in one of my earliest stories (for the original Giantess Planet). The one-and-only active review I got said (and I quote): "WTF?!" I took the hint...and, to this day, absolutely nobody has complained about my _not_ including sex scenes in my stories. LOL!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

And good going on your part to come up with such a clever codename. Let's hope SHE notices and gives you credit.



Author's Response: Well, it literally translates from the French as "jester" or "jokester." And, it does appear to be a legitimate French surname, as well. So, I decided to go with it. As for "Port Manteau?" That was a pun, in its own right. But, I'll let you find out how, for yourself. ;-D

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

So he DONned his moustache.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Reminds me of a woman who sent me a card that said:

"Before I met you I was troubled by reality....

Now I don't even miss it."

Reviewer: HebrewHammer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loving the story so far. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response: Thank you! It's always nice to hear from a relative newcomer. Even if he or she is only new to me. ;-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Shades of L'estrade, and look who's now a quack.



Author's Response: Holmesian/Lovecraftian crossovers seem to be all the rage, re: on-line pastiches, these days. So, I thought I'd conduct another little experiment. Fair warning, though! Chapter 2 probably won't be up until _after_ I finish THE ITSY-BITSY FIGHTER.

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