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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

I note you're trying out the first person narrative method.

Now if a Cheshire Cat, like Alice's had rabies. Would the rabies vanish along with the cat?



Author's Response: Like the exact number of licks it takes to get to the center of a Tootsie-pop? "The world may never know." And, yes, I alternate points of view in the narration of my stories. It's a technique the late, great Louis L'Amour adopted for his Western novels ("The Sackett Family" series, in particular). If there was an interlude that was realistically impossible for the first-person narrator of the story to know was occurring elsewhere, at that exact same moment, then he switched back to "omniscient author" mode to depict it. And, rightly so! :-)

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