Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

Speaking of the giant plasma TV, I think it would be a great gts gag to do what the Goodies did once, and have a character stepping out of the screen at giant size (a woman of course, or even reaching out of the tv and pulling a man into it, with the result that he's tiny in the show).

 

"My nether-portions began to have a ... big reaction".

Ho ho ho.

Shades of strange stirrings in utility belts, old chum.

Author's Response: Well, if I had used the clinically accepted term, "gonads," I would've had to change the story rating to "PG!" Soemthing which I'm mentally see-sawing about doing, after chapter 5, anyway.