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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bob N Weaver meets Duck 'n' Weaver in a future chapter?



Author's Response: More like "the Masked Mantis."

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well I think the readers are going to be wondering about gts content...



Author's Response: Heh! It took me two weeks just to mentally flesh out the mundane opener! But, now that I've gotten the seasoned veteran Ace Corona giving me some encouragement, as well, I'll see what I can do.

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

You're off to a good start, but you should give more of a preview of things to come in this little prologue, as far as the shrinking is concerned. I hope if the woman who shrinks him is Asian that she's half Philipino and half Hispanic, chicks like that are hot!



Author's Response: Esta verdad! :-D

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