Date: May 21 2016 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this shit. It's disgusting, so it's right up my alley. The main character's attitude toward his task makes the story very charming and Cameron is very easy to root for, even though it seems hopeless. The hopelessness has me cheering for his small victories.
In the end, I cannot believe you've made three very unique chapters about a guy stuffed in a girl's asshole. They were all compelling with their own bits of sexiness thrown in. Fuckin' kudos.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your enthusiastic and thoughtful review. It is supposed to be fun and filthy, as well as sexy in its own way.
Date: March 22 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice narrative! I like you cut on the "how I got shrunk" explanation chapter. Although I'm not a big poop fan I will certainly follow your coming chapters.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just had to reread this. You just can't find good butt stories with actually plots. It's mostly the feet or vore stories that have real stories behind them. Nice job!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I've been experimenting with plot-driven stories versus "get to the fucking" stories. I'm glad there's a market for something more substantial.
Date: March 20 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
I cannot believe I misspelled "detailed." Forgive me.
Date: March 20 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved her playful nature, his reluctant acceptance, the dteailed descriptions of the shit, and the wondefully playful antics implied by the ending.
Getting squished by butt cheeks is always fun. I'd have given my left testicle to have been in his position, and Wendel is my favorite!
I hope this helped. Whether or not you do more is up to you.
Date: March 17 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have GOT to do more of this! If you do nothing else in life, you have to continue this story!
Author's Response:
Met with such enthusiasm, how could I say no? Please tell me what aspects you liked about this story and I will use that to develop a series.
[Report This]Date: March 17 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well described story, Aborigen.
Good subject matter with a cruel giantess.
I hope you decide to continue it.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the positive review! I thought this would just be a one-off, but it sounds like there's some interest in more. What elements in the story most appealed to you?