Date: June 03 2018 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 3: Not alone anymore
I just found this story, but it's really great. I love Vicki's assertiveness :)
Date: March 12 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: Not alone anymore
I felt it was very out of character what Eva asked Jessica to do at the begining of the chapter. She's just been shrunk so wouldn't her first thoughts be on trying to esapce, seeing as Vicki was asleep at the time? I didn't think Eva would want to behave that was around Jessica.
I hope Eva is alright though... She didn't deserve to be crushed...
Author's Response:
Hello again stubbornstain!
I do have an explanation for the way that Eva is acting which i will get into later in the story. For now the story will mainly be focused on their perils and the relationship between Jessica and Eva. thank you for reading my story and reviewing, i shall be posting a new chapter later tonight!
Date: March 11 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 3: Not alone anymore
Excellent, just caught up on all 3 chapters. Finally another story I can get into. I like the indestructble theme, offers unlimited scenarios. This is going to be a fun story!