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Reviewer: prophetofgreed Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

You spelt cheeks like checks.

This has a very interesting beginning to the story. Keep it up! =)

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

definitely liking the direction this is going, man.  cant wait to read what happens next!

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