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Reviewer: Pablo360 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

"It was all a dream" chiché. Well implemented, but overused.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 05 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good for a first story.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

"It was only a dream. It was only a dream. Thank God! It was only a dream."

Yeah! Keep telling yourself that, dude. You just might come to believe it (lol).

Thanks for sharing this with us. And, if it's your debut story, here? Welcome aboard! ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks I appreciate the feedback, and is there another site I should upload a debut story to?

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

The description is actually pretty good. I honestly thought this was going to be just another generic story, but I am genuinely surprised as I also didn't spot any spelling mistakes and your grammar is good too.

Welcome to giantessworld!



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad it wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be.

Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

not a bad start, I felt that it might have gotten off to a quick start, but other than that it was pretty well written.

-Jake

Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

A nice dream to have! I personally enjoyed this story as it ticked a few of the right boxes for me!
Hope to read more from you soon!

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