[Report This]Date: November 13 2021 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
I just love that sex scene at the end. The levels to their relationship was fun to watch. Also, I like how it gradually got kinkier too as he got smaller and she also got more confident. Great combination!
I can’t wait for what’s next!
Date: September 24 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
hi, i was just thinking, the incest was... erotic, but im wondering where this is headed, is it possible to make a series 2? id love to read it XD
[Report This]Date: June 13 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
HATED THE END but I loved the story.good work on all the detail and characters. I dont mind the end really i wanted him to escape.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
I really enjoyed the story despite the abrupt ending, don't worry about this. lol
The only thing that frustrated me was his mother becoming increasingly... how could I say... 'colder' towards him and less caring, even threatening to kill him. I was hoping she would really use this growing to work on their relationship and fix the gap between the two of them created during all those years as she turns into a dominant, strict, domestic goddess while still caring about her only adopted son. Maybe her mind wasn't the same anymore after all the growth. The power really can change people even mothers. lol But can certainly say that seeing this growing domestic goddess imposing her dominance towards her tiny helpless son was extremely exciting! Can't wait for your next story!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I guess I wasn't sure where I wanted to go with this one. I'm glad you were able to enjoy it regardless!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2011 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
lol, the thought of a foot tall guy hiking in the coutryside naked is hilarious. great stuff.
cant wait to read what new story you have planned.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing aaron, it's always nice to get feedback. The new story's coming along great