Date: August 17 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
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Date: August 05 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
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Date: August 05 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
a very good story
[Report This]Date: November 19 2011 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
From your mouth to the author's ear, Mason. ;-)
[Report This]Date: November 18 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Having read this chapter for the second time, I'm now twice as anxious for chapter 18.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2011 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
"What adventures awaited him?"
Only time--and chapter 17--will tell.
Date: November 13 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yep!
"Sorry about that, Chief."
[Report This]Date: November 13 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
Whoa! Deja view. ;-)
Author's Response:
Did you read chapter 12 twice, Carycomic? Once at Giantesscity and once here?
[Report This]Date: November 10 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
I just wanted to reassure you, again, that I have been following the Giantess City version, very faithfully.
Author's Response:
Thanks Carycomic!
Date: November 08 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
So they haven't escaped yet? Or have you not written that bit? Perhaps I'm not following your story as well as I should be. Oh well. It's alright so far, although as you will have seen in my previous reviews some ascepts of it I' finding hard to fathom.
Date: November 08 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
So I guess at least Logan might finally escape. I can't believe that a developed economy would not be able to survive on just Arcadia. Given how wasteful these Alta-Earth people are it seems unrealistic to think it can survive much longer given the inevitable greed.
Date: November 08 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
So if getting captives in exspensive why would they ultimately go to waste inside someones belly? Surely they would keep them to save money. It doesn't add up.
Author's Response:
This is mainly a giantess vore story, so the vore aspect might not make sense from a technical perspective, but vore lovers will love it. I'm glad you're giving such thorough reviews for my story, I appreciate it!
Date: November 08 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder how they will ever get back. I'm wondering; surely a lot of people will be in debt if they are constantly betting and battling for the sake of the economy. For every winner there has to be a looser. So it does seem rather odd but I will read on regardless because your story is actually ratehr well written, except for a couple of minor things which really aren't that important.
Date: November 08 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
So there aren't people who disagree with the state of the economy? Surely the way the econamy functions is unsustainable and not everyone wants to battle with tiny people for a living. Maybe I just haven't got that far into the story yet.
Date: November 08 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I see this story is goingbto be interesting, and I can see why the past epxeriences of those in the spaceplace are relevant although I can't help bu feel that the first chapter was rushed in order to get to Alta-Earth.