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Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown

I've been meaning to comment on this story.. I really have been enjoying it.  pitch black erotic dominaiton.  you've gone and created another legendary psychopath!

 

Three stories at once, you're amazing, Jack.

Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown

Great job on the last few chapters.  You did a good job handling the juxtaposition between Julia's absolute physical supremacy and her immaturity/emotional vulnerability.  Them having to participate in her terrible art made me laugh.  I started to feel sorry for her a little bit until she started being a bitch to Gina again.

 

I really didn't see this last bit coming, though.  I mean, I get that Jack started to feel safe and all but goddamn is he pushing it. :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown

i know id be scared shitless. lol
great build up.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown

Whoa! I never would've predicted this not-so-little plot twist.

THANKS for GIVING us such a brilliant new chapter, so promptly. ;-)

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