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Reviewer: Shrunken Mazerunner Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 2: Teacher's Pets

The first chaper was terrible. Too much backstory in stuffed into a chapert. I felt myself going to sleep. The second was better, but not by much. Sorry man. You've got a great idea, but the way you're precenting it is off.



Author's Response:

I will be sure to take this into account when I write the third chapter someday.

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