Date: July 17 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 75: Have a Little Faith
coming from a-month break, i just read the 3 last chaps, it's epic !!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 75: Have a Little Faith
Like any good monster Julia isn't dead till you've thoroughly murdered her with all the firepower the army, navy, air force and marines could muster.
Good show all around, shame she won't live to meet Carly but I'm sure once they both slide into hell there will be a story there to tell.
*tips his fedora*
Author's Response:
Julia is basically my Jason Voorhees.
Thanks for all your commentary on this.
[Report This]Date: July 16 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 75: Have a Little Faith
I love you; no homo
Great job. You delved into the psychology of your characters brilliantly, and your writing is clearly professional-grade. I've said it before, and I mean it: I hope you find a writing career in your future, if you haven't already. Not necessarily erotic fiction, but whatever you choose. I'd read it.
On a side note, it would've been great if Julia just ended up ruling the universe.
Author's Response:
Haha. Oh you're makin' me blush. I'm rapidly approaching the point in my life where I'll need to choose a career, and I do hope writing is a part of it. Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2015 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 75: Have a Little Faith
Wow. Just---plain---WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: July 16 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 75: Have a Little Faith
I'm going on vacation (away from the interwebz), so it looks like I'll have to wait until I get back for the epilogue. That's alright; Jack's waited two and half years (Was Chapter 1 really written in Nov 2011, or earlier?).
Well, you got me. I didn't expect Jack to survive with all of his appendages undigested, and I certainly didn't expect him to end up with a full-size guardian in Gina. The macrophile fanboy in me (or, rather, in my pants) would prefer he not find a way to regain his normal size, but the realistic tone you've struck with this story argues that none of the survivors would want to remain tiny.
Good old Art. Pace Jack, looks like someone knew Miss Mack pretty well, too.
Faith's "Baby's First Memories" book is going to come with a Content Warning. When she turns 16, will she ask her parents for a car or a PMRD?
Well done! A catharsis worthy of Euripides or Tarantino.
Author's Response:
Chapter 1 was actually written in January or February of 2011. So this has been a looong time coming.
Glad I was able to surprise you! It's probably more likely Faith would ask for a car, though, considering how she was portrayed in The Shrink Act Files.
Thanks so much for reading/reviewing.