[Report This]Date: June 07 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill
Guess Julia still has a soft spot for him.
Author's Response:
It may not last very long, though!
Date: June 06 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill
At last!! I was afraid you kept this story away for a while again but thank god you're back with it :)
Great chapter as always and exciting cliffhanger, it seems action is coming!!
By the way, have you ever thought on writing a book or something? I'm amazed about your writing skills and your deep ability to empathize with characters and build their emotions. I'd definitely buy anything you write ;)
Author's Response:
My hope is to finish this story by the end of the summer. Action is on the way. And I am interested in writing a book someday; I appreciate your kind words.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill
IT'S BAAAAACK!!!!
An odd cliffhanger there but I give Jack credit for having the guts to try this tatic with the great destroyer. Hopefully things go better for him than the others who have tempted fate in such a way.
Author's Response:
Back indeed. And guts are just about all they have to work with here. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 05 2015 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill
Ooooh I can sense it...how many chapters until the grand finale?
Author's Response:
Thanks! There are about 5 or 6 chapters left of this story.
Date: June 05 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill
good as unsual! good description, Julia's buying it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And they better hope she's buying it...
[Report This]Date: June 05 2015 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill
Holy Shit Molasses!
She's gonna go volcanic over that one.
Author's Response:
There's definitely a little bit of an eruption coming up, and not the good kind.
Date: June 05 2015 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill
That a very nice ending, an intelligent twist, with an even more excruciating cliffhanger!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: June 05 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 72: Jack and Julia Went Up the Hill
This is an excellent example of your talent for portraying conversation with depth and nuance. I really appreciate it when dialogue is leavened with body language and internal asides, and you always deliver. The entire story hinges on this encounter, and reading it made my guts as icy as Jack's.
That said, I don't think Julia's the only one engaging in desparate wish-fulfillment here.
Author's Response:
Thanks, it means a lot. This conversation is definitely pivotal to the entire relationship of Jack and Julia. But you're right that Jack has his hopes up just as much as Julia.