Date: April 26 2018 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
Shit man, do you read TvTropes too? Charlie's a textbook example of the Smug Snake tope.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
Damn, a bit of twisting and turning there.
Can't wait for the end.
Author's Response:
A bit indeed. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
That's a fine angry giantess moment.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: May 19 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
I'm stuck with a big dopey grin on my face. Send help.
Author's Response:
Emergency services will be there soon, just hang on.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
A good chapter. I'm not usually into the violent stuff, but you've painted such a good narrative and mixed in just enough Gentle GTS to keep me reading. While reading the last few chapters, I had a couple of weird thoughts about what might happen next. This involves how the birth of the baby girl might change things for Julia. One, because of Jack's shrunken size, if Julia really wanted to get lifelong serious with him they couldn't have children. What if she "adopts" the baby on her and Jack's behalf? Two, Julia might start a mini town, shrinking more people, and/or go with goddess thing that Jack convinced her of, and shrink more "worhippers". But maybe she might screen future shrinkees better.
Anyway good story and I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate you giving this a try even if it's not your preferred genre. On your thoughts: 1) You are very perceptive, and that's all I'll say for now. 2) Julia's never been great at screening her shrinkees, but very soon she may find herself in need of more of them, particularly after all the goddess stuff
Date: May 19 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
"I saw a hole in the wall. Under the flower stool outside."
"There's a hole in the batrhoom sink wall behind the blow dryer stand"
It looks like none of us were really paying attention :)
To my (partial) justification, between tv shows and relatives/neighbors/whatever discussing how someone arranged somehing in their house, this topics bore me to the point I actively try to ignore them - kinda like the "shoe shopping" gags in scrubs.
Still, it's been there in plain sight.
For a few rl days.
RESPECT!
(and if anyone noticed and decided not to spoil the surprise - sorry, too latefor taking credit, but thank you anyway)
Author's Response:
Hehe. Glad to hear Jack succeeded in pulling a fast one on not just Charlie but you as well.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
Wow. Just--plain--WOW!!
Author's Response:
:D
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
So many chapters in and still going strong. I'm impressed. Loved the twist at the end and the tension it led to. Smart writting, good passing and damn... that Julia;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing, man. Glad you enjoy the writing. And for the love of all that is holy, please make some new DA comics!