Reviewer: glidingmark Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 61: Everything Happens at Once

There are no existing languages in any parts of our known universe worthy enough to express just how much I enjoy losing myself in this epic tale you've created. I've been following the development of each and everyone of your characters with unbridled zeal. And your writing style is so rich with details that I can picture what's going on as if it were a hit primetime tv show (I keep picturing Julia as being played by Michelle Trachtenberg). So while I am rooting for Jack and the gang to finally find their way out, another, more sadistic side of me anticipates their failure as I do not wish for this story to end anytime soon.

Can't wait to see Charlie reap what he sewed. Karma's a bitch, or, as he would put it, "...a goddamned psychotic bitch with a raging pussy."

Author's Response:

That's certainly high praise! I appreciate your comments and am glad you're enjoying the story. There's still one more 'act' of the story left, so there's still a bit to go before it's over.

It's funny you say that about Michelle Trachtenberg. The mental image I have of Julia is based off someone I know (just the look, not the psychosis), and I realize she definitely does bear a decent resemblance to Michelle back when she was closer to Julia's age based on skin tone, hair color, eyes, etc. Good thinking there, and thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 61: Everything Happens at Once

Great new chapter here, and it's great to see you getting the updates out so quickly. Sorry to not really have reviewed this one yet, though I have been reading it since the beginning, just not one to usually write the reviews and such. Getting really good though. The pace you're going at it strong, and I may be wrong here, but I'm guessing you have a pretty big story idea on the horizon, but want to try to get this one finished before you start commiting to a new story? Maybe not, but it feels like that's the case.

 

I do hope to see Charlie swallowed alive haha, though whatever happens to him shall be interesting. Great little way Jack baited him at the end. Also wondering as to where things go with the baby, whether it will be kept there, or if Julia will maybe grow it to normal size and take it to an orphanage or something, because the care and raising of it might be too much. Lots of interesting little threads here, and it feels like we're getting closer and closer to an endgame

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing! You're actually pretty spot-on about my plan for this thing. There's a decent-sized turning point coming up in the next couple of chapters that I wanted to reach before beginning any new stories (probably Mommy's Time-out 6). It seemed best to reach a logical story break before taking an actual break again from it.

The endgame set-up, however, is still getting closer here. Charlie's in for some retribution, but the way I've got planned is a little different than anything I've done in this story yet. I won't spoil about the baby either, but I will say Julia's more than a little attached to her after holding her for the first time.

 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 61: Everything Happens at Once

The way the chapter ended is just above comments - at least mine; I'll just say www.reddit.com/r/fffffffuuuuuuuuuuuu/.

 

While she may still be... well, herself with the child (count her as a new toy, leave her dad out of the game - you name it), now at least we can hope that whatever nasty thing she was supposed to do will not be against an infant ^^

 

The one thing that makes me worry is that the child still lacks a name - the smart thing to do would be to tell Julia, suggest a few candidates and ask her opinion, but given they had no time to think about it, Anna's death and about a zillion other reasons...

Author's Response:

Hmm, I suppose I've convinced you to come back for the next chapter, then?

You're correct about the baby. Julia's still Julia, but she's got a slightly different side to her that will eventually become more obvious now that the baby's here.

The baby's name will come into things a little later on, and you are right, there are a few more pressing matters at hand.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 61: Everything Happens at Once

I cannot wait for Charlie to die. He's fucking delusional if he thinks rape is hot, that he has ANY chance with Julia, and that he has even a shred of "power" over her. Asshole, comparatively she's like 100+ feet tall, you ain't got SHIT on her. What a fucking pervert. Dude's like 30 and he wants to fuck a 16 year old.

Author's Response:

What a coincidence, this is the exact same attitude Julia's going to have next chapter...

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 61: Everything Happens at Once

I only read this chapter because of Ancient Relic's review. I'm too afraid to read the others.

I'm hoping that the baby flips a permanent switch in Julia's mind. Maybe Julia will regain a sliver of humanity.

Author's Response:

Understandable; this story isn't exactly for the squeamish. Thanks for checking it out all the same!