Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo

Brilliant crush/ vore scene.  It doesn't get much more dramatic than watching a psychotic who's imprisioned you torture and destroy a family member.

Julia is too good at this game.  The way I see it, her only challenge is controling her own actions.  Unless the maid or better yet, her mom, were to accidentally see into her private life.  Their disapearance may be very difficult for her to explain.

Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have in store for Act 3.  I really can't imagine how she'll treat her captives if, until now, had been humane treatment.

With Jack and Julia's newly established intimacy I do hope she decides to discuss and explore her fetish with him.

Excellent work!  Quite the legendary psychotic you've created, once again. :)

 

Author's Response:

Acts 1 and 2 will be cakewalks compared to what Julia has in store for them in 3

Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo

Dude all of your work on this site is amazing. I love all of your stories and this one is just amazing. Please keep going

Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: happiest_in_shadows Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo

It's amusing how each person has a different idea of what an abusive situation is when dealing with a giantess. If it wasn't for Julia being psychotic and well underage I would find being trapped in her panties while she enjoyed them to be rather pleasant. Brian on the other hand will most likely be sickened by it both on a physical level and knowing what she's done. After all he didn't like how her cum tasted in the least. 

Julia seems to have some serious mental issues especially given how her mood changes. That and I notice a lack of parents in her life. While I do not believe it excuses what she's done and I would prefer to see her suffer a horrible death I can't help but believe she's a deeply troubled person. Perhaps while her parents have provided for her they really haven't nurtured her? She may be a bit starved for affection and this is the only way she could think of to get it. That or suffered some kind of trauma in the past.  Once thing seems certain though. If Brian blows his cover they're all going to die.

Perhaps Brian should take this chance to really get to know Julia. Rather then just complying with what she wants him to do. He still seems to be more responding to what she says and does rather then anticipating her desires and working to actively meet them. As long as he's being passive I'm not sure if he'll ever learn how to work her effectively.

Author's Response:

you have a very good grasp of the characters; i'm actually planning to tackle some of the themes you're talking about here in Act III.

Reviewer: Gtslover4 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo

You know if you look at it from the way she treats Jack you would think she isn't that bad but with the others you see how dark and evil she is. I guess when I was wishing Julie gets a happy ending in my other review I had gotten so caught up and her relationship with Jack I forgot what she truely is.

Author's Response:

i see what you mean. she certainly is a deceptive entity

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo

Not sure how this will end but damn crazy Julia is going to add for some fun times in the final act.

 

 

Author's Response:

undoubtedly so. thanks for the review