Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 32: Picnic with a Giantess

Holy... like I said I've read the last chapters and I'm finally discovering how the story got to that point, but even so, that Julia would ask if she was too hard and actually take a yes for an answer surprised me as much as it surprised Jack. Seriously.

 

But hey, it wouldn't be me without some typo, + I'm curious about this one: "a capella".

I'm curious because I'm italian and it's "cappella", but I found a lot of "a capella" or even "acapella" googling around -- is it actually an accepted alternative spelling? (Some people claim it's straight from latin, but my latin dictionary firmly states that "capella" is a diminutive of "goat" :)

 

<hurries back to reading>

Author's Response:

Thanks for another review.  I've enjoyed hearing your thoughts on this somewhat-oldie of mine.  I'm glad that bit with Julia's question threw you for a loop; expect to be thrown for quite a few more later on.

I'd say the word you found is loosely accepted as either, but for the sake of correctness (and because it seems to have stuck out to you) I did add in that extra p.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 32: Picnic with a Giantess

Personally, I'd prefer her having grown some humanity to suddenly realizing she can _breed_ more "pets."

But, it's your story. You must develop it as you see fit.

Author's Response:

i'm sure the characters would prefer that as well

Reviewer: Orr4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 32: Picnic with a Giantess

Another great read, thanks :)

Author's Response:

my pleasure