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Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2018 7:01 PM Title: Kitty Chow

Huh, Already a fun start to this one. Kinda wanting to see who gets the last laugh in this one, but secretly already hoping it's Kitty XD


Author's Response:

I hope it'll be fun! And it's a toss-up between the little guy's desire to live and the big woman's desire to possess him. The eternal struggle.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2018 2:38 PM Title: Serpent's Tooth

It took you SEVEN YEARS to update this?! And I thought I had bad cases of writer's block (lol).

Seriously, though: this was well worth the wait. I just hope Ms. Fox can successfully rescue Little Terry.

Author's Response:

I know, right? I'm the worst! There comes a point when you look at these stories and wonder if they're even worth picking up again... but I could never let them go. And now people can look to me as an example of... I guess... how long they can take a break before returning to their dreams? I don't know.

Anyway, thank you very much for your patience. Following entries won't take years to roll around.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2011 3:30 PM Title: Kitty Chow

Well, now! That's what I call an action-packed start.


Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 9:17 AM Title: Kitty Chow

Kitty is so evil. :/

Author's Response:

She doesn't mean to be bad. She just wants things that come with high costs at other people's expenses.

Reviewer: Atrus Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2011 11:36 PM Title: Kitty Chow

Hi Aborigen! As a long time GTS fan, I think this story shows a lot of promise! It seems like you see this being a sort of wide-ranging, travelling story, but I love the chemistry between the two characters you've already introduced. I hope we'll be seeing more interaction between them soon.


P.S. I never thanked you for "First Deconstruction" :


"I didn't hear any of that," said the young woman, removing her jeans. "I'm too sexy for my ears to work properly, as you can see by my curvaceous, firm young bottom in frilly lace panties. Observe as I proffer my nubile frame to you, a miniaturized version of a strange man I've never seen before, yet I libidinously take to you like a duck to water." She thought a moment. "A duck that really wants to have sex with water, that is. A duck that, upon finding a strange little shot glass of water, not knowing what's really in it, wants to put it into its body anyway."


OH, I laughed so hard.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm surprised to run into anyone who remembers the old material. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope this story turns out as well as you imagine.

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