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Reviewer: The Demon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

WOW.

Reviewer: The Demon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love that song,cupcakes.

Reviewer: thejoker2445 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

Could you please continue this story or make a sequel? :)



Author's Response: I have played with the idea of making a sequel...

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'll climb up to this standard. I will do it. Just give me advice, please help me write like this.



Author's Response: How can I help you?

Reviewer: Gtslover4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

This has to be one of my personal favorite stories while reading on here. I'm aware that you sometimes base the character off of yourself and find that a great plus side, seeing as how I haven't seen many female gts fans on the internet. I myself being a fan of the cruel and heartless and revengeful giantess loved some of the scenes in this story. I hope in any of your future work you focus on more slave stuff. Such as nail painting and feet licking, seeing as how the two girls in the story had been so high and mighty on the socal ladder and then in the story were reduced to mear slaves for nail painting was a great part.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Pretty good story so far only through two chapters so far. I noticed your comment. If you are having trouble with paragraphs it can be a setting.

When you click on your account info, go to edit preference and make sure

"use tinymce wyswyg editor" is seleted with a check mark in your box.

then when you your pasting your story in from microsoft word, open office, wordpad, etc. you should see a toolbar in the in the typing window. In the toolbar you should see a clipboard with a W and clipboard with a T. If your word proccessor saves in doc, or docx use the clipboard with the W. If it your word processor saves in txt then use the clipboard with the T.

What this does is allows you to maintain your formatting, paragraphs, etc of your story.

Reviewer: KageTengu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love this last chapter. I felt you where missing butt stuff in your story im glad you finally put her in there. With some rather nasty results hehe. With each chapter your getting more psychotic an I think im falling in love with you!!! Keep up the good work there.

Reviewer: KageTengu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow i've been away for a bit. But your still as horrifiying as ever. The way she killed her freind the methodical torture. I mean wow. I think i may be falling in love with you. Keep it up!

Reviewer: supernatural Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 13 2012 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Um, ITs weird but i usaully dont like this kind of story but i actually liked this.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

story is has great descriptions even though im not into the whole saliva soaking her, it was written well.
hope theres more of annas feet though(just my prefererence)

aaron

Reviewer: Mrduhkota Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

This is an absolute masterpiece of cruel gts, and I just love your style. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.

Reviewer: Mars Frog Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

Weeeellll now, that's not entirely true... I've been reading your stuff, since I share a love for cruel, hungry GTS. :)

Do carry on whenever you can~

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

Ah, yes.  Another slow and methodical torture scene.  I am not really into mutilation like this, but amazingly enough I keep coming back for more.  Your character's methodical tormenting of her enemies/prisoners/slaves is always fascinating and captivating.  Anna's calm and indifferent attitude is...frightening.  Knowing that there will not be a happy ending ahead makes it even more fascinating.  These girls are doomed.  Every reader knows it, we just don't know what you are going to come up with next.  

But I for one am eagerly awaiting to find out.  

Reviewer: KageTengu Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow you demented!!! Keep it up. This is as scary an as graphic as your last story. Buuuut im curious if these are based off your own personal thoughts. And life

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 01 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yikes!  I fear Anna!  Good addition, as I have come to expect from you.  Thank you for the exciting writing and the always interesting updates.

I write a lot of myself into my stories, and I assume that many do.  The Anna from "Lynn's Adventure..." said a few things at one point in that story and the Anna from this story said some other things that compel me to ask how much (if any) of this is autobiographical?  I completely understand if you would rather not answer.



Author's Response: Actually, quite a bit of this is autobiographical, and I had to go to therapy for a year because of it. It makes for a good story though.

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the way the story is progressing.  It seems you are building up to something and I am looking forward to seeing what it is.  You have a way of really capturing what people would actually say in a given situation.  The conversations are really natural and flow much the way a real conversation would.  That's harder to do than it sounds, the results are often robotic and mechanical.  You don't have this problem, and it makes your stories easy to read.

As for the paragraph indent, try typing in word and then cutting and pasting into the text window.  That's what I do and it seems to work well.  PS: I use a Mac, and it's anyone's guess if it'll work the same on a PC.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

great job. loved the toe painting. an the color.

aaron

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

hmmm. im interested to see where you take this. hope you continue it, itswritten very well.

aaron

Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am excited to see you put another story up and I promise I will follow it closely and read every word.  I can't wait to see what Anna has in store for these two!

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