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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

Excellent story! I especially loved how you depicted what must be traditional rivalries. I wonder if Trish will wind up getting zapped by some weaponized Spellbreaker gas? ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

And, something tells me Trish is being more than metaphorical with that adjective. ;-)

Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

hahahaha, beans shot out of here eyes!? oh man, that got me laughing!



Author's Response:

I mean to write beams not beans.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

But, we _are_ earthlings! ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

That question didn't occur to me. By the way Sizeloans perfer to be called sizechangers. Calling a sizechanger a Sizeloan is like calling a human an earthling.

Anyway thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very intriguing! A GTS-goddess who can make her disciples (both willing and reluctant) capable of shrinking men. I wonder how Sizeloans might feel about that?

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