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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 6: Sister Schemes

holy crap.. what an amazing chapter. this story is really remarkable. i mean eventhough im not a fan of micro.. this story may just sway me to that spectrum of gts literature. not saying that i like it as much as the 1"-3" sizes but thanks to your stories im finding that i dont dismiss a story just cause its 'micro'. thank you.

one question i have: what are the rebellions going to do to her? i mean shes basically right, all they could really hope to do is scrap her toe-nail polish...
well minuss, just keep doing what your doing cause i really appreciate all the time an effort that goes into your stories. it really shows.

ps debra from 'the wedding story', will she be coming back? or perhaps another blast from the past? (i only ask here because you dont seem to reply to that story)

pps sorry for the long-winded response.
aaron

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like this story and the Wedding Story. You are correct, physically she is probably beyond the reach of the rebellion. I am toying with an alternate ending where she is not. So, I may end up writing two endings we'll see. As for the Wedding Story I can't really answer your Debra question because I don't know myself. The epilogues to that story are unique for me. Usually, I'll create a rough outline of a story and so I'll know the outcome before I get to the ending. However, the Wedding Story was already complete and the epilogues were supposed to be one-off short scenes. However, they have been coming to me faster and more frequently than I thought they would when I wrote the first one. So, we'll just have to see. With those I'm making it up pretty much as I go along.

 

minuss

Reviewer: Klyk Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: Sister Schemes

As I had said before awesome story.
I really like how cruel she is and how you play up the size difference it is great.

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