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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2: New shipment

The changing on the point of view is annoying because I noticed you repeated yourself a few times and it made me slightly confused in places because I thought it was a mistake.

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