Reviewer: mmicrostufxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2024 11:33 AM Title: Prologue

Amazing story, I had such a good time reading it. Thanks minuss!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2022 9:56 AM Title: Prologue

I guess now we know why Lilliputians weren't completely wiped out or enslaved by Brobdingnagians when they have such a weapon available. It would make most of them think twice before attacking. The worst part would be you couldn't see them until it's too late. 

Reviewer: Mr Decadent Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2021 5:55 AM Title: Prologue

The death of Mary in the chapter 9 is one of my favorite deaths I have read in any giantess media. All she had lived for, all she was, all her hopes dreams an experiences, all ended in a single, careless step. She was so hopeful that she would make it, that her and rick would survive, and yet a random step was what ended her life. truly a harrowing situation, and I tip my hat to you for writing it. 

Reviewer: fengqingxue Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2020 4:35 AM Title: Prologue

非常好的一片文章,我喜欢看到女主人公扮演女神的角色统治几百万人并且穿插色情的要素.

Reviewer: Stevejackson Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 5:58 AM Title: Prologue

Dear minus when will you finish the story, what color is George and dang that girl is really busty with EE's

Reviewer: ZombieGhost Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2012 11:12 PM Title: Prologue

I really liked this story, but mostly for the beginning. I'm a huge fan of mega/giga sized giantess, but I also really love the gentle side of the fetish. Not many stories, images, etc capture any form of gentleness on this scale. I hate John for various reasons, but later on I can't help but agree with his point of view. Just not his method of showing it to everyone else. I have, during my free time, been making an 'alternate' version of the story. Much of the beginning is still yours, but I've been rewriting almost everything past chapter 3 to fit my tastes. I can't post my version for moral and legal reasons, but I would like to send you it through email when finished. I need an opinion on my writing style. I'm about 45% done with what I hope to do, and am working on it for an hour a day. If you are okay with me sending it to you, please reply.

I also promise not to post my version anywhere without your express permission. I just wanted to clarify, so you wouldn't think I was using it as my own work.

Also, if you saw my previous review before I deleted it, I did so because it didn't look as good as it sounded in my head.

Author's Response:

Hi ZombieGhost,

Sorry, I am not the best at responding sometimes. I am fine with you sending it to me or even posting it without doing so. I don't want to stand in the way of any new content; I am not tying to make a living from this or anything. If you do post a re-write just indicate that its an alternate universe of my story in the post and then its fine by me. You can PM me at gc if you want me to look anything over. If anybody gives you any guff for posting the re-write just point them here as proof for permission.

minuss

Reviewer: amazingp Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2011 7:40 PM Title: Prologue

You are an amazing writer, possibly the best on Giantess World.  I prefer gentler giantesses, so I really liked the first few chapters and some of your other stories set in the Gulliver universe.  I wanted to start out by saying that because everything else is nitpicking, which in my opinion is something a great story deserves (to make it better) but can be confused for derision (which it is not intended to be).

My main criticism is that you've mangled the size scales.  In Gulliver's Travels the human : Lilliputian scale is 12:1, the Brobdingnagian : human scale is also 12 : 1, thus the Brobdingnagian : Lilliputian scale is 144 : 1.  This would make all the tiny people in that universe about 1/2".  Small, yes, but not nearly as small as in your story.  As you make no use of the other qualities of Brobdingnag or Lilliput  it might be better served just calling this the Minuss Universe

The scale in your story seems to be about 6000 : 1 (6" statue is 3000 feet).  Manhattan has about 1.5 million people and would be 20' by 2', not near the size of a small TV tray.  Even if you assume a population density similar to Macau (50000 /sq. mi), you'd need about 15 square feet to fit a million people at a 6000 : 1 scale. And that's just dense urban land.  To fit what amounts to a small country (~10000 sq miles) in a basement (~400 square feet) would require a scale of about 24000 : 1 (or higher).  That may be a better scale to work from. 

Alternately, you could just ignore this nerdy stuff and keep with what you've got, because it works well even with minor scale inconsistencies. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment and critique I welcome both. I will admit, as I have before, that I altered the stated scale in the original Swift classic. The scale is closer to the Milo Minera Gullivera drawings where the scale looks closer to 1-2 inch tall Lilliputians. I could have called it the minuss universe I suppose, but I liked the concept of the three sizes and as Gulliver's Travel’s is in the public domain and universally familiar I decided to lean on it. Having said all that, it is difficult to maintain consistent scale across all physical objects in an altered size story throughout a large story. My guess is that Gulliver's Travels does not even succeed at it completly. I realized while writing this story that the population density somewhat defied credulity when compared to the real world, but I don't think it is physically impossible at this scale for this density. I tried to address the density issue with some explanation in the story. I guess the comparison should be to an ant colony and not to Manhattan, in my opinion. Despite all this I know that probably in all my stories there are some minor scale issues as I think all stories of this ilk face. I suppose if enough effort was applied all scale issues could be eliminated, but then my already slow pace would be reduced much further, not to mention any detriment that much math and modeling would have on other aspects of the story. Please don't view this response as overly defensive. All of your critiques are valid and I enjoy discussing them. I am simply trying to provide rational and maybe just a little defense of the story development decisions made. Thanks for your thoughtful comment.

minuss

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2011 6:44 PM Title: Prologue

Plot wise, it's kinda unique, totally nonsensical though but so is this genre :p so I'm not going to stress that. I mostly see this story ending in tragedy for the Lill's. I don't know if they attempted it, but did the resistance try to protest in a normal...err, relatively normal fashion before they tried to escape? I assumed that if they did their "Goddess" would just smite them with *insert body part* for being ungrateful or whatever. Trying to escape is equally foolish because the chances of them finding help are smaller than they are,  but at the same time they really have no choice which is quite sad.

 

So far I haven't quite clicked with any of the characters yet. The Giantess is a boderline sociopath nympho with delusions of godhood whose moral compass malfuctioned some years ago. Now considers the people she saved nothing but toys for her amusement. At this point I don't think she's getting more lili's to save them, she keeping the flow going for herself. And since I keep feeling like the lili's are going to die anyway I found myself not really trying to attach myself to them but that may change if the story progresses.

 

Fetish wise, it's pretty good, I like the micro/mega interactions.

Reviewer: Klyk Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2011 3:04 AM Title: Prologue

Awesome chapter.
Love the way that they feel they can gain something from escaping. Hope there hope will be crushed in a nice fashion.

Reviewer: Klyk Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2011 2:19 AM Title: Prologue

I have loved all of your previous stories in the Gulliver universe.
Don't know if I have left a review before but they are great.
And this one is shaping up to be equally great.